Ornithologist's dream

Ornithologist's dream

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Ornithologist's dream



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Title: Ornithologist's dream
Pixel Artist: Muxaun  (Level 4 Deputy :: 4684 points)
Posted: 11/8/2013 10:02
Palette: 14 colors
Statistics:  24 comments    57 faves    1 avatars

I always wanted to draw a tree from this angle of view.

Maybe this is not an ideal tree but I am almost happy with how it looks.
The piece is at the point where it is almost overpixeled.

 

IMO it looks best with 3x size.

 

UPDATE:
I've reuploaded the piece with the sky completely redone. Here's the previous version: http://imageshack.us/a/img10/8656/o8sz.png


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Eggy (Level 4 Deputy) @ 1/8/2014 04:16

Cool work, dude :) Also... uh... that's a lot of owls. At least for the tree itself. XD


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Phexion (Level 5 Detective) @ 11/18/2013 01:49

 Well done on this piece. Great work!


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ToSta (Level 3 Enforcer) @ 11/14/2013 03:07

just awsome!


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Zizka (Level 10 Operative) @ 11/12/2013 07:36

 I voted for this. There's something really mind blowing about the composition of this piece, makes me feel dizzy, like inversed vertigo. Well done!


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vimmel (Level 5 Detective) @ 11/11/2013 08:37

Love those birds! So cute :) The tree and the birds looks great, but I really dont like those clouds, they really looks like blossom, they could use some depth and less details with a mid to larger flowy puffy feeling :)

 

 

Nice work!

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Iceberg (Level 5 Killer Klown) @ 11/11/2013 00:25

 Отличная работа.


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Friend (Level 1 Jukyu) @ 11/10/2013 16:47

big improvement


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Damian (Level 9 Federal Agent) @ 11/10/2013 08:57

 You currently are using 14 colours, consider using the two extra colours you have at your disposal on the clouds? Looks great, still love those eyes :)


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Chroso (Level 1 Intern) @ 11/10/2013 05:45

 Pretty amazing job man, 5/5


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reis (Level 6 Serial Killer) @ 11/9/2013 13:57

Great and creative job!


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Brejan (Level 1 Rookie) @ 11/9/2013 08:29

 Actually I also thought the clouds were blossom at first glance on both versions but on closer inspection they are obviously clouds. It's a fantastic image.


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AlabasterJazz (Level 1 Intern) @ 11/8/2013 20:26

 I like 2x zoom the best, and definately the newer version over the first one.  Great job, it looks fantastic!


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Lusque (Level 5 Detective) @ 11/8/2013 20:06

 amazing


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Muxaun (Level 4 Deputy) @ 11/8/2013 15:57

Despite I hate continuing pieces I once considered 'complete' I just cannot ignore all this valuable feedback!

So I've redid the sky from scratch. I had to redo eyes, AA and some branches as well. 

I hope it works fine now.

 


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Dr D (Level 4 Shichikyu) @ 11/8/2013 15:17

 Tbh, I thought the clouds were supposed to be the canopy of a cherry blossom tree  or so when I looked at it earlier.

I do really like the rendering of the animals/trunk though.
 


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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 11/8/2013 15:15

 Great point philstrahl. I think you've nailed it.


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philstrahl (Level 1 Rookie) @ 11/8/2013 15:01

hmmm... my take on this (and I could be completely wrong) concerns the size of the cloud-structure. on top it should be bigger, because we're looking straight up. the further down in the image (=the farther away from us) it should lose contrast and get smaller.

btw, i love how crisp the eyes are and the POV in general is very interesting!


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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 11/8/2013 14:52

 I see what muffin does and mentioned it in the forum when just a WIP. As far as I can tell this illusion happens because the clouds use 3 colors WITH contrast where 2 might be better or 3 with low contrast. Considering the use of dithering in clouds is almost always a good idea. By being lighter it will help the feeling of height by suggesting more diffusion and eliminate the minds' eye wanting to see a 'regular' perspective to compensate for the extreme view chosen here.

This fool pixel shows 3 color low contrast that relies on dithering to add depth.

http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/36838.htm


Anyhoo, its all nitpicking cuz its great and should do very well this week.
 


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DatMuffinMan (Level 4 Mercenary) @ 11/8/2013 14:11

 As far as my first point goes, I have absolutely no clue as to how to fix it. The second point is because the clouds have as much detail as the tree/birds. If it were me, I would recommend either reducing the cloud count (and have the rest a plain sky-color), but then again, it is not my piece. 


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Phill (Level 6 Commander) @ 11/8/2013 11:58

 I think this is pretty great the way it is. Great job!


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Muxaun (Level 4 Deputy) @ 11/8/2013 11:28

a) I tried hard to make clouds look like you're watching from behind. I'll try to improve on that but I doubt I will succeed on that. 

b) I agree, but the only way to reduce distraction I can see is to reduce the contrast. I'll play with it more, but - again - I doubt I can make it better. :(  Any ideas on this are welcome. 


 


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Mandrill (Level 8 Partner) @ 11/8/2013 11:15

Looks like we have a winner, ding ding ding. :)

Great piece.


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DatMuffinMan (Level 4 Mercenary) @ 11/8/2013 10:32

 I think the clouds take away from this piece for a few reasons - 

a) the tree has a distinct perspective, whereas the clouds look like they are viewed head-on

b) the tree and birds have very nice details and textures, but the clouds distract the viewer from them (I didn't notice the furriness until I zoomed in very closely).

 


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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 11/8/2013 10:20

 black birds ftw!


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