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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 19 March 2012 at 11:33am
Personally I think any sentient life form should count. It'd be even better if 'non-sentient' things could be used to convey jealousy as well, like a shriveled house plant 'looking' out the window at an oak. But I didn't organize this challenge so that's just my two cents.
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Quote MIERDINSKY Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 12:04am
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 12:08am
Challenge Updated

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Quote MIERDINSKY Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 12:17am
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<font size="7">Challenge Updated



NO ENTIENDO ;S SORRY
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Quote aeveis Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 12:28am
Thanks for the challenge update! I had been working on something that didn't quite fit but now it does. I'm basically done with this, but since submitting isn't up yet, maybe I can get some feedback here and make some more improvements.


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Quote Mngwa Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 2:26am
I had such idea


Still in early phase, though.



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Quote Nevercreature Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 3:27am
Originally posted by MIERDINSKY

Originally posted by Jeremy

<font size="7">Challenge Updated



NO ENTIENDO ;S SORRY
 
Significa que el "Weekly Challenge" ha sido actualizado. Ahora se pueden seguir presentando imágenes hasta el próximo domingo y además se puede incluir a "alguien" y a "ALGO" celoso...  (Por todo este lío de la definición de "somebody"...)
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Quote MIERDINSKY Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 7:40am
Originally posted by Mngwa

I had such idea


Still in early phase, though.





jajaj a mi me pasó al ver una pelicula porno :D  buena suerte
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 9:12am
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Well, yeah. I continued working on the jellyfish piece, even though it's not suited for the challenge :P



Ah crap, this is awesomeness. Not to mention it fits the rules now.
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Quote AirStyle Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 4:07pm
Oh, Mrmo...You make life harder. Glowing jellyfish, with a bloom lighting effect? How do do we compete with that? *sigh....
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Quote iMoose Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 6:09pm
Well, seeing as my jelly blobs are back in the game now and I have extra time to improve my piece, I might as well post my progress here again. Let me know what you guys think:



Obviously the clouds are still WIP. I wasn't quite satisfied with the green blob's expression (it doesn't quite convey jealousy, more like surprise) and I thought this would be a neat way to symbolize envy more clearly.

Also, Mrmo, you pixel master, that piece is wonderful

Edited by iMoose - 20 March 2012 at 6:10pm
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Quote a3um Replybullet Posted: 20 March 2012 at 8:56pm
wip

update


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Quote Graindolium Replybullet Posted: 21 March 2012 at 3:44am
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Quote Nevercreature Replybullet Posted: 21 March 2012 at 6:23am
Originally posted by a3um

wip

update
 
 Without seeing the final pic I'll vote for you.
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Quote yrizoud Replybullet Posted: 21 March 2012 at 7:28am
a3um: The alignment of the gun with the background pattern (vertical) is a bit unfortunate, it makes the gun blend in.
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Quote Franuka Replybullet Posted: 21 March 2012 at 9:34am
All these look amazing, guys.
I think I'm jelly :I
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Quote iMoose Replybullet Posted: 21 March 2012 at 8:25pm
Almost finished, I think. Update:




EDIT: Small update. Fixed some edgy lines and played with color.



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Quote failureboy Replybullet Posted: 21 March 2012 at 10:54pm
@a3um

Your piece is wonderful, but I don't see how it conveys "jealousy."

@iMoose

I think you have too many colors going on in the wings. Maybe get rid of the green and other brightness. Also, the face in the background clouds is cool, but takes some attention away from the poor, little slime. The jealous slime should be your focal point, IMHO.

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Quote iMoose Replybullet Posted: 21 March 2012 at 11:41pm
@failureboy
I think you're right about the wings. I took out most of the sharp greens and the reds. I kept the softer greens though, because I think they make the wings a little prettier, and they help to further distinguish the wings from all the rest of the blues in that area (as well as balance the green across the piece).



I see what you're saying about the face, and I agree that the blobs should be the main focus. I really want to keep that face there though. Perhaps making more brightness contrast between the blob and the clouds will make the blob a more prominent focal point? Here's what it looks like with the clouds significantly darkened:



Right now I'm not sure which I like better. Guess I'll see what I think with fresh eyes tomorrow morning. Thanks for the feedback

@a3um
I love the colors and the hazy dark look, great composition so far. Am I right in thinking the man with the gun is jealous of the man with the woman?

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Quote a3um Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2012 at 12:51am
@iMoose - thanks and yes, you are right. I guess I went overboard with the setting >_< I don't know why, but the first thing which came to my mind after I saw "pure green required" is plasma pistol...

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Quote failureboy Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2012 at 12:58am
@iMoose, yes I like the darkened clouds and face more. Perhaps you should also change the blue background behind the flying slime. I dunno. That yellow sun in the upper corner also tugs at the eye. Perhaps get rid of it (or change it to blue?)

Sorry for the confusing advice. Color choices can be tough.

edit: perhaps with the clouds you could stick with the slightly brighter green version, but get rid of the BRIGHT GREEN in the eyes (they really stick out in the darker version).

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Quote Mngwa Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2012 at 2:35am
Originally posted by Mngwa

I had such idea


Still in early phase, though.





Hey, now I realised that there is some transparency ban. Does that mean I have to add background?
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Quote a3um Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2012 at 3:03am
@Mngwa - yup.

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Quote Tassilo Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2012 at 5:03am
Hello together.



This is my first post ever in here, guess I'll leave it like that. 16 colours, 64x48px.

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Quote Tassilo Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2012 at 5:56am
Oops, sorry, double post.

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Quote Nevercreature Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2012 at 6:21am
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@Mngwa - yup.

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Quote Graindolium Replybullet Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:20pm


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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 23 March 2012 at 3:25pm
I don't see someone/something being envious of someone/something else, Graindolium. Just a portrait.
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Quote slaughterism Replybullet Posted: 23 March 2012 at 10:20pm
I havent done any pixel art in quite a while so i think im a little bit rusty.
 
Here is my WIP (its almost easter!)
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Quote Graindolium Replybullet Posted: 24 March 2012 at 5:25am

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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:34am
^I still don't see it. You need to show what they're jealous of too.
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Quote tuaarita Replybullet Posted: 25 March 2012 at 2:34am
I don't think even he can see it. :p
I'm running in the desert,
running in to the sun,
running out of blood
and I'm going numb.
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Quote Graindolium Replybullet Posted: 25 March 2012 at 12:36pm
Je suis d'accord pour donner la définition de représentation mais alors une fois le challenge fini, je ne comprend pas pourquoi personne n'est capable de spéculation pour mon art-pixel , je prend avec amertume la réaction anti-artistique de vous tousse !!! j'ai horreur de me justifier, surtout au près de faible d'estime.  Mais je reste fier de mon art et je ne le prendrais pas mal si celui si n'est simplement pas accepter pour le challenge !
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Quote AirStyle Replybullet Posted: 25 March 2012 at 3:39pm
Fine, Grain. Do what you want. But if no one can see your portrayal of jealousy, don't expect to win this challenge.

No one is asking you to justify yourself, only that you follow the rules for this challenge. If you can't do that...then...it might not be a good idea to participate in it.
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 25 March 2012 at 8:03pm
J'aime tes créations aussi. Mais il faut que tu suives tous les régles du concours. En ce moment je ne vois ni la personne jalouse ni le sujet de la jalousie.
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Quote Graindolium Replybullet Posted: 25 March 2012 at 10:32pm
une plante qui pousse au printemps , à côté d'un vieux pied de l'année dernière + ou - 'mort' qui exprime ça jalousie à travers un regarde névrose , aussi une jeune pousse en bas qui montre un visage de colère et de haine suite à sont retard sur sont temps !
Cette jeune pousse étant issu des même racines du pied mort jaloux.
Donc je ne pense pas avoir viser à côté du sujet qui était (le vert avec envie , la jalousie "
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 25 March 2012 at 10:45pm
Oh! je ne connais pas le mot "pied" dans cette contexte, c'est quoi, un tronc? comme:



?

Je verrai les avis des autres mods.


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Quote Graindolium Replybullet Posted: 25 March 2012 at 10:47pm
yea , indeed !
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